Here is a concept for the Science Channel logo bumper. The two story boards are almost the same with slight differences. The first seems to be a bite tidier but less fun than the second. The ideas is to show the formula of TNT (or Trinitrotoluene for more sophistication) finishing with explosion. I made a video test of the first board and I can say it doesn’t look clear enough, it’s too long and maybe there is too much going on… I could try divide it in two. I’ll appreciate any idea you can give me, mean while I’ll try to develop some more concepts.
story boards: http://www.scribd.com/doc/13160783/Elements-V1-V2
video test: http://saasko.mindrust.org/skool/test.mov
storyboard…conceptual very well done. execution…good..i think it can be finessed a bit more the treatment….but looking good.
Video…..good approach. Whats not working right now is the panning motion up to the dynamite. Panning makes sense….but when you see it with all this information…it is very difficult to understand whats going on…..i think what you should do …. is make areas of interest and have the camera snap to them rather then constantly panning….this way….attention of the scene can be maximized. Everything after the TNT is awesome….i like the explosion and logo reveal….have a bit more fun with the twirling of the left overs while the logo is up….but dont be to distracting becuase what is important is the Network LOGO.
good man.
Go!