well I didn’t make the concept shorter, but I think it’s a bit more clear now… instead of the formula pointing to the TNT, the chemical reaction is inside the stick. The actual formula is shorter so there will be enough time to see it.
here is a storyboard and a motion test (sorry for the poor quality)
Storyboard,,,…Nice concept, for sure….I still think that your graphic treatment needs to be refined. the frames look well orchestrated. But, It looks to 3D…try to give it a bit more of a organic feel. Reconsider what the inside of the dynamite looks like.
Video…After leaving the dynamite…its all good. But i still think you need areas of interest with the camera snapping to rather than one clean motion.